This reading was extremely discriptive compared to anything else ive read in this class. The writer did a good job at capturing everything she noticed or heard. She observed how all the bowlers behaved with each other. She also picked out how the younger bowlers behaved compared to the older ones. The writer also described the area around her very well.
The writer discussed the prices of all the food, bowling shoes, etc. She also found out what events were held and when and about all the different leagues that they hosted. She even talked to the owner of the bowling alley but he left before she could ask about the family buisness and what not.
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